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Melanie Fisher
Posts : 319 Join date : 2009-08-22 Age : 29 Location : England.
| Subject: Melanie Midnight Fisher Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:06 am | |
| {Basic(s)} Name: Melanie Fisher Nickname(Optional): Mel Age: 17 Race/Species: Demon Sexual Orientation: Straight Hometown: California Occupation: Student
{Physical} Eyes: Amber Hair: Brunette Body: Scars from being whipped on her back. Face: Birth mark on her neck, in the shape of a heart. Height: 5ft Weight: 7st
{Personality} Melanie Fisher... She's strong-willed, serious, hard-working and passionate. Mel puts up a strong sheild, hiding her emotions from the world. Only those really close to her (which isn't many) have seen the real Mel. She is a hard-worker and a perfectionist, too. She will gladly spend time slaving over one single thing, just to get it right. Her passion can get too much at times. Sometimes she gives herself away to easily and people take advantage of her reckless, passionate heart. Melanie doesn't always follow her heart, however. Usually, she is careful when trusting people, and she doesn't always tell the complete truth unless it is absolutely necessary. Over-all, Mel is a fairly quiet, fairly careful soul, but those who get on the wrong side of her will see she's not as weak as she looks.
{Background} Melanie was named so because she was the spitting image of her great-grandmother, also named Melanie. The middle name, Midnight, was chosen due to her miracle birth, just on the dot of Midnight, on the 7th April. Melanie was born into a strict and unforgiving family, and soon found she could not live like a normal child. While all her class-mates were out having fun she found herself cooking and cleaning and learning how to iron. Melanie had no life. She slept, got up, went to school, came home, worked adn went to bed. She had no friends - she had been shunned ever since she had attended school - and she never spoke to anyone but her parents. Then a newcomer arrived in California, on Melanie's 17th birthday. Black, a tall, 20year old, dark and handsome stranger befriended Melanie without hesitation. Melanie, however, was quick in giving Black her heart. She had always been passionate and trusting. Black, too, was fast in entrusting Melanie with his love, and soon the couple were inseperable, much to Melanie's parents' distaste. The two lovers soon became the talk of the town, and it seemed nothing was going to come between them. They were wrong. Melanie's parents threatened to move to New Zealand, without Black. Being a creature of the night, Melanie had never been attracted to New Zealand and was immediately against the idea of moving. Especially without Black. While Melanie was furiously searching for a way out of moving, Black was watcher her grow into a beautiful 17 year old. He knew it was time. It took all his courage to tell Melanie, knowing he would scare her, but he did it. He told Melanie what she was. A demon. Shocked at first, Melanie refused to talk to Black, and even cmale close to moving. But soon enough she found what Black had said was true. She did do inexpicable things. She could make things float if she concentrated hard enough. Going back to find her lover, Melanie let him teach her all he could, but soon enough he reached the extent of his magical ability. He was not a demon, merely a messenger for the devil. He had to leave soon; but what would happen to Melanie? He searched for a way out, but could not, and to entrust she got the best care, he sent her to the Academy. Melanie did not know Black was only a messenger, and grieved for him. She believed he abandoned her, even though with every day that passes, his love for her grows ever stronger. She became quiet and secluded and reluctant to trust anyone else. She attends her classes and works. She does not go out. She does not party. She does not trust anyone, only herself. Whether she is waiting for her former lover to return, or whether she is trying to get over him, even Melanie does not know. But as each day passed she got thinner and quieter and ever-more distrusting. That was, of course, until she Vladen, and realized true love had no boundaries. Now not able to leave his side for long, due to their bond, Mel has found true love and is happy for the first time in her young life. And as Vlad is a Lord, she is to be a Lady next to him, living the rest of her life with the man she loves. {Appearance} [Only admins are allowed to see this image]
Last edited by Melanie Fisher on Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:46 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : They asked me to add more detail. So I did.) | |
| | | Pretty.Little.Mistake
Posts : 427 Join date : 2009-08-18 Age : 31 Location : Ireland
| Subject: RE: Melanie Midnight Fisher. Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:10 am | |
| Firstly... I am extremely reluctant to accept another vampire... there's tonnes.
Secondly.. Can you lengthen the personality a little? Just to give us more of a feel for her. :]
Also, her background is much too short and fuzzy. You need to explain why she has whip marks on her back and who Black is. Why she was turned, the circumstances and how she ended up at the Academy.
If you need any help just ask. :] Taking a look at the approved students' applications will help too. | |
| | | Ember_Fangs
Posts : 1188 Join date : 2009-08-19 Age : 29 Location : England
| Subject: Re: Melanie Midnight Fisher Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:56 am | |
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| | | zZ\NaThAn/Zz
Posts : 432 Join date : 2009-08-19 Age : 29 Location : behind you.....
| Subject: Re: Melanie Midnight Fisher Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:06 am | |
| You stole my real last name!!! :banhammer: XD | |
| | | Atreyuvision Admin
Posts : 382 Join date : 2009-08-16 Age : 32 Location : Florida, USA
| Subject: Re: Melanie Midnight Fisher Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:15 am | |
| One question, How is she a demon? | |
| | | Melanie Fisher
Posts : 319 Join date : 2009-08-22 Age : 29 Location : England.
| Subject: Re: Melanie Midnight Fisher Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:54 am | |
| Demon by birth, but her parents kept it from her. x | |
| | | Atreyuvision Admin
Posts : 382 Join date : 2009-08-16 Age : 32 Location : Florida, USA
| Subject: Re: Melanie Midnight Fisher Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:11 am | |
| Good enough for me, Approved. | |
| | | Melanie Fisher
Posts : 319 Join date : 2009-08-22 Age : 29 Location : England.
| Subject: Re: Melanie Midnight Fisher Thu Aug 27, 2009 4:12 am | |
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